11 February 2009

script update

For Thom, and whoever else cares,

I have a to-do list in my pocket of 6 things that need to be done before I can call finished this large (and hopefully last) revision of my feature script. Not all of them are big.

They are:

1. A transition scene maybe involving a secondary character
2. Fix the end of an early scene
3. Add an exposition scene that adds to the main character's worldview
4. A line (or lines?) of dialogue to trigger a big shift in the script
5. Add a scene near the end, somewhat large
6. Write a description for an imaginary film that would go in a film festival program.

And then hopefully that's it. I'm shooting for the end of the week, but that's optimistic.